When I got to the first chapter of the book, I didn't understand what was going on until I had read a couple of pages. This because the characters in the introduction of the book wasn't the same as in the first chapter.
As the first chapter starts, you're introduced to Gloria. A young girl, who prefers her robot (take note that this book takes place in the future) before real people as friends.
Her best friend - the robot, called Robbie, is described as bulky, but as well doing everything he can to make Gloria happy, because that is what the robot does.
The author doesn't really describe how Gloria looks, but rather focus on how she is, and what's happening. As far as I've understood it, Gloria doesn't show her unhappiness (she is clearly without a lot of friends) to anyone, but on the way she acts, you can almost tell. She doesn't want to be alone, and therefore she has Robbie, who does anything Gloria asks for.
"Gloria shrieked in dismay. 'Wait, Robbie! That wasn't fair, Robbie! You promised you wouldn't run until I found you!'"
After this, Robbie starts running in slow-motion so Gloria can catch him.
It seems like a very sweet sci-fi story!
SvaraRaderaGreat use of English and good that you make use of quotes. Keep up the good work and always make sure you read your text through before publishing it!